This was awesome! It may have been the first visual novel I've ever read, and I was so sucked in! Keep at it, I wanna see the finished version. It was REALLY good!
I would totally play a game like this, but the demo is way too short and uneventful to judge the future project. Music is nice, the concept is great, art is great - it's funny how both Tobias and Millicent disliked how the children's hospital looks, while the screenshot of it was the first thing to catch my eye on this page. The writing is also nice, although a bit... much at times ("undelight"? "peaceable"?) Overall, though, your game's page seems a bit abandoned, which is a pity - I wish this game does get made one of these days.
Such a fascinating premise. The demo kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way through. Looking forward to future updates, and good luck with the kickstarter campaign!
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Are you by any chance looking for a portuguese translation for ur game?
This was awesome! It may have been the first visual novel I've ever read, and I was so sucked in! Keep at it, I wanna see the finished version. It was REALLY good!
I would totally play a game like this, but the demo is way too short and uneventful to judge the future project. Music is nice, the concept is great, art is great - it's funny how both Tobias and Millicent disliked how the children's hospital looks, while the screenshot of it was the first thing to catch my eye on this page. The writing is also nice, although a bit... much at times ("undelight"? "peaceable"?)
Overall, though, your game's page seems a bit abandoned, which is a pity - I wish this game does get made one of these days.
Wow, it looks very nice.
Wow,awesome game!
hello Pavior, do you have a gmail account I could contact you on? I may have a potential collaboration proposition I wanted to run by with you.
goodluck on completing this!
Thanks, JP!
Such a fascinating premise. The demo kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way through. Looking forward to future updates, and good luck with the kickstarter campaign!
I'm delighted to hear that. Thanks so much for trying it out!